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Irrationally Passionate by Jason Kothari

15 Sunday Mar 2020

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business world, enterpreneur, inspiring

In Pretty Woman, he simplifies his complex job by saying ‘I buy big companies, then break them into smaller companies and sell them” She asks, “And that’s all it takes to make you a millionaire??” (or somewhere along these lines)

Jason simplifies his life as a voracious appetite for diving into troubled waters (read businesses or startups) and getting a kick out of smoothening the choppy waves. He makes it sound simple , magical and ‘Heck, I can do it too’ Continue reading →

Book review: Silent realities by Ranjan Kaul

18 Sunday Sep 2016

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book review, ranjan kaul, realism and magic, short stories, twists and turns

A cluster of 10 stories tilting between the real and unreal, with myriad characters in an ever changing multilayered society. The range captures the frailties, moods and impulses of human behavior.

That’s what the gist of the blurb says. I agree in part.

4 stories impressed me, namely Lallan, The Slap, The Nest and Touch. These should’ve been placed at the beginning of the collection to hook the readers, instead of inserting them midways and towards the end.

Lallan & The Nest have a parallel between the human-animal world that explores human psyche well and throws up believable, relatable characters. Slap & Touch have a mellow tone and an unhurried pace Continue reading →

Book review: Love forever @ Rajpath by Kalpana Mishra

22 Monday Aug 2016

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book review, cultural rituals, forced marriage, Rajpath, Zabaria shaadi

Indians don’t marry individuals – they marry families. What happens when the existing cultural  rift is sorely tested by criminal rituals?

‘Love forever@ Rajpath’ is a cross cultural love story between Shalu and Kartik. She’s modern, progressive, extrovert. He’s orthodox, shy, introvert. She’s Sindhi. He’s Bihari – and never the twain shall meet.

The duo have widely differing opinions on culture, diet habits, dowry and caste. However, whilst the couple iron out the wrinkles, trouble brews as soon as families get involved.

Shalu (autobiographical shades of the author?) an employee in Govt. organization and Kartik fall in love through a series of official tours, conversations and competitive exams.  Just when marital utopia awaits …disaster erupts from totally unexpected quarters.

Trapped between loyalty and love, Kartik reaches breakpoint as he finds himself dealing with near death, forced marriage and criminal litigation by his own fiancée. Her insistence on proceeding with the case is the last nail in their relationship’s coffin – or is it?

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My Q to author: What is significance of Rajpath in the title?

Her answer: Setting of the story is the Govt organization. Since most offices in Delhi are located on Rajpath, hence it features prominently in title as both protagonists are in ministry.

My Q: Why did you choose ministry as occupation for the protagonists? Was it familiar ground for you or was it vital to the plot?

Her answer: I am also an Officer (She is Deputy Director of Govt. of India), so I had information on the posts’ nomenclature which was important to the story.

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Personally, I thought making Shalu a Govt official ensured her active role in rebelling against the horrifying rituals. A layperson may not possess insiders’ knowledge or the legal knowhow to deal with her fiance’s abduction into enforced marriage. 

Cons: The crucial social stigma of Zabaria shaadi comes a tad late in the story. In consequence, much text is spent on the blossoming romance between 2 apparently mismatched people.

A possible twist could have been added, if ***SPOILER ALERT*** Kartik’s marriage was already solemnized by the time of his rescue.  It would have ensured a more challenging ethical, legal and social dilemma for the couple. ***SPOILER ENDS***

Pros: A hitherto undiscovered world of ministry officials and their inbuilt gender competition opens up. The forbidden topic of male slavery forms the crux of the plot. The language is simple and uncomplicated. Characters are human, flawed and believable. The cover pic is unpretentious, clean and evokes curiosity.

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Pages: 220

Price: Rs 195/- (I got a free copy for review)

Publication: Shrishti

Genre: Fiction

Book review: Shakuntala the woman wronged by Utkarsh Patel

08 Monday Aug 2016

Posted by dr sweetyshinde in Classics, Constructive Criticism: Book reviews, Debutante Authors, Mythology

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book review, dushyant, independent, legitimacy, Mahabharata, mythology, shakuntala, strong women, utkarsh patel, vyas and kalidasa

A confession – I’d totally forgotten that Ved Vyas is the original writer (inspite of being an ardent adorer of his work). It’s Kalidasa’s romanticized version that was ingrained into my mind since childhood.

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Yes, Shakuntala used to be my most-wanted bedtime story. Of course, it’s not the Vyas version that Mom narrated to me – and finally I know why. Vyas was a hardcore realist. No illusions, no lovey-dovey hackneyed sentiments. No blurred vision. Just cold, brutal realism. A huge hug of gratitude to Utkarsh Patel for re-introducing us to Ved Vyas’s Shakuntala. A woman, in so many ways, a worthy predecessor for Vyas’s Draupadi.

Kalidas’s Dushyant had the convenient excuse of Durvasa’s curse to forget Shakuntala after the secretive Gandharva marriage. Vyas’s Dushyant seduces, uses and discards Shakuntala.

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Twitter review – A tale from abandonment to abandonment, culminating in liberation. An emphatic and empathetic female pov.

Shakuntala is the love child of Kshatriya-turned–sage Vishwamitra and the heavenly nymph Menaka. Rejected by an furious father & forced into abandonment by a reluctant Menaka, Shakuntala is adopted by sage Kanva. Shakuntala nurtures an independent mind, curious queries and clarity of thoughts as she questions men, power,dharma, laws and politics around her.

She gets an opportunity to practice what she preaches, when King Dushyant weds, beds and then dumps her. Shakuntala cuts through the riff-raff to reveal his ugly self to Dushyant. She ensures her son Bharat’s royal heirloom before she walks off into a lonely horizon with her pride, values & dignity intact.

Pros:

  • An opportunity to revel in Ved Vyas’s original genius and his consistent homage to fiercely independent women.
  • Kudos to Utkarsh for writing so tenderly & heartfelt from a woman’s pov, whether it’s about  Ahalya, Menaka, Shakuntala or Madhavi.

His reply: I think all of us have a woman in us and all women have a man within them. Its the theory of anima and animus which works. In my case, the understanding of the women’s psyche is probably more defined and I have never shied away from accepting this factor.

My Q: Did Dushyant have other marriages in the 6 years between his 1st and last meeting with Shakuntala? If so, what would be status of Bharat vis-a-vis other royal heirs and the heirarchy?

His reply: Majority of the versions are silent about Dushyant’s other wives. It could just be a guilt factor which did not allow him to remarry. I have brought his angle about his guilt, when the minister suggests that he get married but Dushyant demurs.

  • Utkarsh also neatly juxtaposes Dushyant’s hunter views ‘ He did not like to hunt if there was no chase.’ It fits in perfectly with Dushyant’s views on feminine conquests.

Cons:

  • First few pages have dialogues of 2 characters crowded into one paragraph. It’s wholly unexpected from a Rupa publication.
  • I found it self-defeating when Shakuntala extracts a pre-nuptial promise of legitimacy for her son. She however extracts none for a daughter, thus making a daughter as vulnerable to subsequent slurs as herself. Given her feminist tirade, it seems out of character. But that probably, is a query targeted at Vyas rather than at Utkarsh.
  • The title should have read ‘A woman to be proud of’ instead of ‘A woman wronged’. The latter gives Shakuntala a victim tag, which she vehemently refused to become.

Verdict: Timely & time tested, well researched (Utkarsh does hold a degree in Comparative Mythology from Mumbai university) and well presented woman’s perspective by a male author. Recommended for admirers of mythology, Ved Vyas and fiery women.

Genre: Mythology/ Fiction

Publication: Rupa

Author contact: www.utkarshspeak.blogspot.in

Price: Rs 295/-

Pages: 269

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Book review: Let the Game Begin by Sandeep Sharma

14 Tuesday Jun 2016

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betrayal, book review, chess, kings, murder mystery, reincarnation, revenge, sandeep sharma, thriller

Seamless fusion of History with Mystery. Sandeep Sharma (author) weaves an intriguing revenge saga spanning over 4000 years.

Storyline– a spate of seemingly unrelated murders start unraveling once they coalesce into a common link. This kickstarts a tale of bitter betrayal and rousing rivalry between 2 warring kings of yore.

The author touches on myth (immortal Shamans), science (DNA replication, electromagnetic radiations) and philosophy (immortality, rebirth) to create an enthralling page turner.

Let The Game Begin by Sandeep Sharma

I liked – Breathless pace of story. Numerous twists around every corner. Unexpected death of a key character. Effective use of flashbacks and flashforwards between 2 timelines. One of the best written prologues in recent times. Amusing undercurrents of competition between CLAW, RAW and police force. Continue reading →

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